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Commentary

  • It becomes a little melodramatic at this stage. Symbolically, it is pouring, with lightning and thunder; and we also fear the worst for Andy. It is also rather coincidental that the thunder should roll now, to conceal Andy breaking the sewage pipe – though one can assume that he chose this night because there was a thunderstorm.

  • Red's cliché is appropriate for a man of little education.

The editing heightens the sense of impending tragedy. Red's worried face DISSOLVES into Andy sitting miserably on his bed; CU of the rope in his hand, TILT UP to his impassive face, DISSOLVE to Red. FADE to BLACK.

Chapter 19: He's not here

CUT to morning.

At the morning's head-count, Andy doesn't emerge from his cell, and the chief bull guard Haig is glaringly angry: "You'd better be sick or dead in there, I shit you not. Do you hear me?"

The scene cuts away as he exclaims: "Oh, my Holy God" at the entrance to the cell. CUT to the warden opening up his shoebox to pull out his shiny black shoes - and instead finding Andy's worn work boots. Sirens sound.

The warden can't believe Haig's words: "He just wasn't here."

He wants all men on this level to be questioned, especially him, pointing to Red. Red is brought into Andy’s cell and is asked if he knows anything. Truly, Red doesn’t.

Astounded by the inmate's disappearance, Norton mocks what an evangelist might say:

Norton

Lord! It's a miracle! Man up and vanished like a fart in the wind. Nothing left but some damn rocks on the windowsill and that cupcake on the wall. [He gestures toward the poster of Raquel Welch hanging on the cell wall.] Let's ask her. Maybe she knows. What say there, fuzzy-britches? Feel like talking'? Oh, guess not. Why should she be any different? [He holds up some of Andy's carved chess pieces and hurls them indiscriminately at everyone.] This is a conspiracy. That's what this is. It's one big damn conspiracy. And everyone's in on it. Including her!

The chess piece reveals Andy's miracle - the rock punctures a small hole in the poster and disappears into the supposedly solid wall. The warden pushes his finger - and then his whole hand and arm into the torn side of the Raquel poster. He rips off the poster - from the perspective of inside the tunnel, the camera pulls back to reveal the passageway through which Andy escaped.

CUT to searchers, dogs and river:



VO

"In 1966, Andy Dufresne escaped from Shawshank Prison. All they found of him was a muddy set of prison clothes, a bar of soap and an old rock hammer damn near worn down to the nub. I remember thinking it would take a man 600 years to tunnel through a wall with it. Old Andy did it in less than 20."

Flashback

A flashback reveals how Andy accomplished the amazing feat.

When he first carved his name into the concrete wall in 1949, a chunk of the concrete fell to his feet - and stimulated him to patiently and meticulously carve a way out:

V.O.

Geology is the study of pressure and time. That's all it takes, really. Pressure and time. That and the big goddamn poster. Like I said, in prison, a man'll do most anything to keep his mind occupied. It turns out Andy's favourite hobby was toting' his wall out into the exercise yard a handful at a time.

That last night in 1966 in the warden's office, while Norton is dialling the combination to open the wall safe, Andy conceals the real black ledger and files in the back of his pants and puts replicas into the safe. He wears Norton's black, shiny shoes back to his cell, and his prison clothes cover Norton's shirt and tie underneath.

As part of his well-executed plan, he places the incriminating records and his chess pieces (and the warden's clothes) into a large, sealed plastic bag, ties the bag to his ankle with the six foot rope, and . . .



Commentary

When Andy does not appear, all, including Red and the audience, fear that he has hanged himself. As Red comes out of his cell, he looks towards Andy's cell.

And when Haig looks into the cell and raises his eyes, we are misled. "Oh, my Holy God!" CUT to Norton opening the shoebox.

A full-on headshot of Norton marching along tier two encapsulates his fury and determination.

When the rock goes through the poster, we are not allowed to see this, only the astounded faces of Norton, Red and the guards.

The strings are held on one solemn note.

The warden pokes his hand right into the hole and then we see him, Red and a guard from inside the hole, zooming out. The strings break into a lively jig.

CUT to five police cars speeding towards the prison, then to the search in the creek, with men finding Andy’s items and photographers snapping them, the worn out rock hammer prominent on the black and white photograph which the camera zooms into.

Now the film backtracks to allow us to see how he did it. A montage reveals the methods.

Chapter 20: The escape

Andy squeezes into the tight tunnel shaft. When he emerges through the wall, he times his attack on the sewer pipe with the crashes of thunder; then inches his way head-first through the raw sewage passage:



V.O.

Andy crawled to freedom through 500 yards of shit-smelling foulness I can't even imagine. Or maybe I just don't want to. Five hundred yards. That's the length of five football fields, just shy of half a mile.

He emerges from the dark tube and lands in the waist-deep creek filled with cleansing water.

In the film's most familiar image, Andy strips off his prison shirt and T-shirt in the middle of the creek and extends his arms up from his half-naked body to the sky - victorious and liberated. The camera pulls back from overhead as the rain washes down on him in droplets.

The next morning while his escape is being discovered, the camera follows an anonymous man's shiny black shoes as he enters the Maine National Bank in Portland: "Until that moment, he didn't exist - except on paper." He had "all the proper ID" - identified as the 'phantom' Randall Stevens - when he withdrew and closed all his accounts and accepted a cashier's cheque, purportedly to live abroad. A final request is made to add a package to the bank's outgoing mail.

V.O.

Mr Stevens visited nearly a dozen banks in the Portland area that morning. All told, he blew town with better than $370,000 dollars of Warden Norton's money. Severance pay for 19 years.

The package is delivered to the offices of the Portland Daily Bugle. The day's newspaper - which figuratively and literally blows the bugle of judgment on the warden - is tossed down on Norton's desk as he reads it - with the scandalous headlines: "Corruption, Murder at Shawshank - D.A. Has Ledger - Indictments Expected."

Police sirens sound in the distance as they approach the prison. Norton glances at the needle-point - now read as prophetic: "His Judgement Cometh and That Right Soon" and opens the safe, finding Andy's black-covered Bible, the Warden's gift, instead of the black ledger with evidence of evil-doing. The inside cover is inscribed with Andy's handwriting:

Dear Warden, You were right. Salvation lay within. Andy Dufresne

The Bible is, coincidentally, opened to the first page of the Book of Exodus. From there, the pages are hollowed out in the shape of a rock-hammer to conceal his wall-chipping tool. Outside the prison, the D.A. arrests a dumbfounded Captain Hadley who "started sobbing like a little girl when they took him away." Looking down on the scene, the warden opens his desk drawer where a handgun sits.



Commentary

Andy is metaphorically reborn as he emerges from the dark tube (birth canal) - at the other end of his journey is the primitive 'mother figure' Raquel Welch - and lands in the waist-deep creek filled with cleansing water = baptism. The film has much religious symbolism.

Effective long shot of a floodlit prison, panning down to show him emerging from the pipe into the creek, so emphasising the distance.

Rain pours down on him, washing him clean. He is laughing. The orchestra has built up to a resounding crescendo during the escape.

A brief CUT repeats Norton looking down the tunnel.

MONTAGE of police arrival, arrest, heightening tension. A repeat shot of four police cars speeding towards the prison. Hadley is handcuffed. Norton observes this from his office upstairs; he pulls open a drawer to reveal a gun = OUTPOINT



Chapter 21: The arrest

CUT to DA and police climbing the stairs – great high angle shot.

CU on gun as Norton loads six bullets. Men hammer on his door. He points the gun at the door. We are led to think that he is going to fight it out, an opinion reinforced by the six bullets and the voice-over, "Norton had no intention of going that quietly." He suddenly puts it under his chin, and blasts a hole through his head - off camera. The glass window behind his desk shatters into pieces that are speckled with blood, and the gun falls to the floor.

Red provides an afterthought:



V.O.

I like to think the last thing that went through his head – other than that bullet - was to wonder how the hell Andy Dufresne ever got the best of him.

During mail call a few days later, Red receives a blank postcard picturing a Texas round-up cowpoke on the back of a giant jackrabbit with the exaggerated caption: "Cattle Punching on a Jack Rabbit." Another allusion to Harvey the Rabbit? (see p.21) It's postmarked from Fort Hancock, Texas, "right on the border. That's where Andy crossed" to fulfil his dream of freedom in Mexico.

Andy is at the wheel of a red convertible on a winding road next to the coast. His legend becomes larger than life for the inmates left behind:



V.O.

Andy Dufresne, who crawled through a river of shit and came out clean on the other side. Andy Dufresne, headed for the Pacific. Those of us who knew him best talk about him often. I swear the stuff he pulled. Sometimes it makes me sad, though, Andy being gone. I have to remind myself that some birds aren't meant to be caged. Their feathers are just too bright and when they fly away, the part of you that knows it was a sin to lock them up does rejoice, but still, the place you live in is that much more drab and empty now that they're gone. I guess I just miss my friend. FADE

Commentary

The camera tracks upwards to show the blood-spattered, broken window; slow PULL BACK to show Norton dead.



  • "not long after the warden deprived us of his company," = nice understatement

  • the postcard shows a cowboy breaking in a jack rabbit = Andy breaking Norton.

  • We see Andy driving a red convertible on a winding coastal road = Red's imagination? or reality?

The helicopter shot turns out into mid-ocean.

Outside the walls, in the prisoners’ graveyard, Red is weeding and the men are raking up hay. The colours are warm, autumnal. The headstone is an apt place for Red to meditate: "Sometimes it makes me sad. . . "



Chapter 22: Red's third parole

1967: For the third time, Red attends a parole hearing after serving 40 years of his life sentence. Times have changed; there are four men and one woman on the board. Wiser and more open about his rehabilitation, he answers them straightforwardly with regret for a crime he committed in a past era:



Red

Rehabilitated? Well now, let me see. You know, I don't have any idea what that means... I know what you think it means. To me, it's just a made-up word, a politician's word so that young fellas like yourself can wear a suit and a tie and have a job. What do you really want to know? Am I sorry for what I did? There's not a day goes by I don't feel regret. And not because I'm in here or because you think I should. I look back on the way I was then. A young, stupid kid who committed that terrible crime. I want to talk to him. I want to try and talk some sense to him. Tell him the way things are. But I can't. That kid's long gone. This old man is all that's left. I got to live with that. 'Rehabilitated?' That's just a bullshit word. So you go on and stamp your forms, sonny, and stop wasting my time. Because to tell you the truth, I don't give a shit.

Red is approved for parole when an automatic stamp marks his papers APPROVED in red ink. Like Brooks before him, the old inmate walks out of the prison gates, rides the bus to Portland, and is led to the same room in the hotel where Brooks had committed suicide. He notices the epitaph scrawled high up on the wall near the ceiling. It is a difficult adjustment to have a job bagging groceries in the Foodway with the freedom to "take a piss" whenever he needs to.

VO

Forty years, I've been asking permission to piss. I can't squeeze a drop without say-so. There's a harsh truth to face. No way I'm going to make it on the outside.

Will he follow in Brooks' fatal footsteps? He pauses at the window of a pawn shop and notices two different, symbolically-contrasting objects: the camera pans across a row of handguns and ends the shot focusing on a compass:

VO

There’s a harsh truth to face. No way I’m going to make it on the outside. All I do anymore is think of ways to break my parole so maybe they'd send me back. Terrible thing to live in fear. Brooks Hatlen knew it. Knew it all too well. All I want is to be back where things make sense. Where I won't have to be afraid all the time. Only one thing stops me. A promise I made to Andy.

Red hitches a ride in the open bed of a red pickup truck to the country town of Buxton. He walks up the road.

Commentary

Red appears resigned to staying the rest of his days in prison. His friend has gone. He’s too old now to make a new life for himself. And he’s negative. The camera closes in on him and holds him on screen for a long time.



The metallic click of the approval stamp comes as a surprise. He’s escorted to the gates and looks around in wonder. In the bus, he clutches his suitcase as Brooks had clutched the seat in front.

  • Many of the shots and camera angles, plus V.O., echo Brooks.

The strings hold a pensive note while the piano tinkles.

Both handguns and compass have symbolic meaning. Again, we are led to believe that a bad deed is to be done.

He rides in the back of a red truck cf. Andy's ride to freedom in an open red convertible

Note how he removes his jacket – this is a long walk, and hot. DISSOLVES emphasise this.



Chapter 23: The rock

He walks into a field, navigates with the compass in hand to a long rock wall and the big oak tree, and locates a large piece of gleaming black volcanic glass. Under a rock pile is a tin lunch box with an ocean liner on its front. Cautiously, he looks around, sits up against the rock wall, and opens the box. Inside is a plastic bag with money in an envelope ($1000) and a letter:

Dear Red,
If you're reading this, you've gotten out. And if you've come this far, maybe you're willing to come a little further. You remember the name of the town, don't you? I could use a good man to help me get my project on wheels. I'll keep an eye out for you and the chessboard ready. Remember, Red. Hope is a good thing; maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies. I will be hoping that this letter finds you, and finds you well.
Your friend,
Andy

With his coat slung over his shoulder, Red walks back through the field - grasshoppers spring into the air all around, symbolic of the new-found liberation he is soon to experience. He makes his decision and skips parole. Before leaving the hotel to join Andy, he carves his name next to Brooks' signature: "Brooks Was Here."

"So was Red." He has internalised Andy's words:


VO

Get busy living, or get busy dying. That's goddamn right. For the second time in my life, I am guilty of committing a crime. Parole violation. Of course, I doubt they'll toss up any roadblocks for that. Not for an old crook like me.

He purchases a Trailways bus ticket for Fort Hancock, Texas and expectantly looks out the window toward the sun at the start of his Thru-liner journey through the golden New England countryside toward Texas:

VO

I find I am so excited I can barely sit still or hold a thought in my head. I think it's the excitement only a free man can feel, a free man at the start of a long journey whose conclusion is uncertain. I hope I can make it across the border. I hope to see my friend and shake his hand. I hope the Pacific is as blue as it has been in my dreams. I hope.

Commentary

Red finds the big piece of obsidian – appropriate for a rock hound.

The old tin with an ocean liner on it - foreshadowing his travels to come.

Town not named in case someone else finds it - Andy is always cautious.

"Not for an old crook like me" = the same words Brooks uses in his letter re his suicide.

Chapter 24: The reunion / end credits

beach, where Red walks bare-footed on the sand toward an old wreck of a boat. With simple hand tools (a hammer rests on the boat!), Andy is patiently and meticulously sanding the old paint from the boat's ancient surface. He slowly turns and sees his friend approaching - and jumps off to greet him. The camera pulls back, revealing the wide, distant horizon of the blue Pacific with no end in sight.



Commentary

Scene filmed in the US Virgin Islands

The camera pulls back to high angle, aerial, extreme LS as Red and Andy embrace on golden sand.

We see the wide, distant horizon of the ocean, no end in sight - symbolic of the long days ahead. The expanse represents freedom. No bars or guards to restrict them any longer. Both are redeemed.







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